What is Love II
Love is a hidden fire,
a pleasant sore,
a soothing pain,
an agreeable torment,
a sweet wound…..
In short….a gentle death.
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Wow! Napaka-lalim naman nito. It’s good poetry and you got the knack for it, clearly.
Comment by Major Tom — May 19, 2007 @ 8:46 am
>>Major Tom
thanks…
Comment by curacha — May 20, 2007 @ 2:17 am
hmmmm… a poem of contrasts… i love it. being inspired sure does make us weave our best poems. *winks*
Comment by carey — May 20, 2007 @ 8:43 am
>>carey
i was sad, not inspired when i wrote it….
Comment by curacha — May 20, 2007 @ 3:14 pm
Ganda naman nito, talagang mula sa kaibuturan ng puso, sobrang sad ka nga siguro. Cheer up!!! Sa takbo ng bilangan talo si Richard, Cesar at Manny. Thank God.
Comment by Lani — May 21, 2007 @ 6:27 am
yipee! talo sila! gosh, wise voter pa rin pla ang mga pinoy!
Comment by curacha — May 26, 2007 @ 5:48 pm
this is very, very well said. i like how it acknowledges that love is not always the bright and shiny feeling it is at the beginning. it has its dark side, too. unfortunately.
Comment by liz — May 31, 2007 @ 8:43 am
>>liz
thanks for your visit. yeah love is a mixed emotion..happy and sad…
Comment by curacha — June 1, 2007 @ 5:41 am